I quite enjoyed these, especially Berenson Bash (though that thing up Rachel not wanting to get older? Totally hit me in the gut--nothing truly happy comes out of this fandom, does it? Not a (negative) critique of you or this fandom--I kind of love--and definitely write based on--the fucked up tragedy of it al.l). Anyway, I'm rambling, but... very good job. :) You captured Rachel and Jake very well.